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She stood at the edge, the waves crashing on the cliff far below her.
The warm salt air blew about her face, playing with her hair.
Her bare feet touched the stones, warmed by the heat from that day’s sun.
Her long silk dress rustled gently around her ankles.
Her arms were open taking in the setting sun’s warmth as she gazed down below her.
For once in her life she felt completely free.
Free of all the troubles and heartache in her life.
And there had been many troubles for her to deal with.
This freedom wiped away all her sorrow but one.
She was left with the deep feeling of loneliness.
It was that same loneliness that drove her to that very edge.
Taking a deep breath she leaned forward, letting the salty air gush past her as she fell freely.
©2008-2009 ~Bec0530
:iconbec0530:

Author's Comments

Just a little something that came to my mind today.
Take whatever meaning you can from it, because I don't even know what I mean by it.

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:iconskopje-tiran:
Wow. This piece is full of great emotion. Kind of sad.

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He who slings mud loses ground.
:iconbec0530:
Thanks.
Who knows what's goin' on up in this head!
:hug:

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...It takes a minute to find a special person, an hour to appreciate them, a day to love them and an entire lifetime to forget them...
:iconsquirrel-23:
I love it..
Very deep with a lot of emotion..

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let's nuke the planet and dance in the fallout
:iconbec0530:
Thanks a lot. :)
Thanks for the fav and watch too!
:heart:

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...It takes a minute to find a special person, an hour to appreciate them, a day to love them and an entire lifetime to forget them...
:iconsquirrel-23:
You're very welcome for evreything. :]
You're a great writer.

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let's nuke the planet and dance in the fallout
:iconshanni-chan:
Waow! This really well done! *_*

Reminds me of something I once wrote. The girl I wrote about also felt great pain and jumped off of a great height.

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Princess of the little ninja people and a phoenix progany

Beauty is the life that you create for yourself and believe that happiness will come to you.

There's no certainty that can keep you from living your life the way you want it to be.
:iconbec0530:
Thanks. :)
It just came to me. (See most recent journal entry for further explination.)
I do like the way that this turned out, even though it made my boy friend worry about me. :P

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...It takes a minute to find a special person, an hour to appreciate them, a day to love them and an entire lifetime to forget them...
:iconshanni-chan:
lol, it made him worry about you? That's sweet.

When I read mine to a few of my college friends and some of the regulars, they asked me what it was about because it gave the possibility of something different. I simply told them that she could've died and the last person she looked at was her sister or her sister saved her life and she was looking into her sister's eyes.

I might post it up on dA later. :3

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Princess of the little ninja people and a phoenix progany

Beauty is the life that you create for yourself and believe that happiness will come to you.

There's no certainty that can keep you from living your life the way you want it to be.
:iconbec0530:
Sounds like something you'd right.
Yeah, it worried him, called me emo too! XD
Then again he knows all the shit I've been going through lately and would give me just cause for it.
You should post it! I want to read it!

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...It takes a minute to find a special person, an hour to appreciate them, a day to love them and an entire lifetime to forget them...

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